Firstly of all, you have chosen a really suitable model, with very suitable features to illustrate the mood that you want to bring about. Great choice of outfit to compliment the setting too.

For the framing, you have to chose to use a subtle yet classical approach to bring about the idea you have, with a toned down environment to compliment the subtle pastel colors of her clothings. Its a fab framing to project your vision.

however for the model's face, I thought it could be better choreographed, to properly bring out her best angle for the flattering effect, there's also a little too much 'neck room', making her neck look longer than it really is. you would also like to brighten up some shadows on her face and add in some details on her hair, which looks pretty muddled up.

Overall, I love how you projected your visions, just some minor tweaking and its all perfect. I really love her icy-cold gaze too, feels scary yet enticing